Comments on: Before and After Screenshot: Copywriting

By: Livia

Livia — Tue, 02 Aug 2011 01:44:49 +0000

Whoa, whoa, get out the way with that good inmfoartion.

By: Maya Brooks

Maya Brooks — Fri, 01 Oct 2010 11:55:05 +0000

i used to do copywriting as an alternative income source but it is quite tiring~”*

By: Sean Kaur

Sean Kaur — Thu, 12 Aug 2010 17:44:01 +0000

i have been into Copywriting lately and this stuff also requires some writing talent;**

By: Ruby Jones

Ruby Jones — Fri, 07 May 2010 00:41:50 +0000

Copywriting is also a skill that takes years of practice to become very effective in advertising what you are selling and “”`

By: Brian Armstrong

Brian Armstrong — Thu, 24 Sep 2009 20:29:26 +0000

Agreed Greg!

By: Brian Armstrong

Brian Armstrong — Thu, 24 Sep 2009 20:29:07 +0000

Good variation :) Thanks for stopping by the site John. I saw you guys did an interview with Charlie Hoehm recently. I started following his stuff recently too!

By: Greg Moreno

Greg Moreno — Wed, 23 Sep 2009 20:10:23 +0000

Writing requires more brainpower than coding :)

I go for specific benefits as headlines. So, my vote is on “Save Money”. “Better value” is generic imo.

By: John Bardos - JetSetCitizen

John Bardos - JetSetCitizen — Wed, 23 Sep 2009 17:33:18 +0000

Hi Brian,

It is great to see real examples to compare.

I agree that everyone is getting sick of those long sales pages with all the testimonials. I can’t believe that anyone buys from pages like that.

Great copy writing truly is an art!

I am no copywriter but if I were to take a quick stab at your example, I would shorten it a little more and put the key points in the beginning.

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By: Brian Armstrong

Brian Armstrong — Wed, 23 Sep 2009 16:08:08 +0000

I like it Eric…sounds a lot better!

You just reminded me of something too – I find reading it out loud helps. I’ll hear something out loud that sounds weird sometimes but looks fine on paper.

EasyBroker is coming along nicely.

By: Gordie | LifestyleDesign4U.com

Gordie | LifestyleDesign4U.com — Wed, 23 Sep 2009 09:13:56 +0000

I freakin’ hate those long, long, long sales pages where they have tons of red and blue text, highlighted text, hundreds of testimonials, etc. They look so tacky and seem like crapola even if they’re true.

I’ll trust a review over a sales page any day, especially a BuyersVote.com review. ;)