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	<title>Comments on: Writing Less Is Better (And Harder) Than Writing More</title>
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		<title>By: Brian Armstrong</title>
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		<dc:creator>Brian Armstrong</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 20 Jan 2009 20:44:06 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Wow...that&#039;s dedication, and I don&#039;t doubt you&#039;re right.  I usually don&#039;t have the time for that but I&#039;m sure my posts would be better if I did.

There was a guy I went to school with who did that.  He&#039;d get A&#039;s on every paper and I found out how one time.  For a 10 page paper he&#039;d write 20 pages and then cut stuff out until it was down to 10.  Thanks!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Wow&#8230;that&#8217;s dedication, and I don&#8217;t doubt you&#8217;re right.  I usually don&#8217;t have the time for that but I&#8217;m sure my posts would be better if I did.</p>
<p>There was a guy I went to school with who did that.  He&#8217;d get A&#8217;s on every paper and I found out how one time.  For a 10 page paper he&#8217;d write 20 pages and then cut stuff out until it was down to 10.  Thanks!</p>
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		<title>By: BillinDetroit</title>
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		<dc:creator>BillinDetroit</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 20 Jan 2009 19:06:53 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>My best posts start out in the 3,000 to 5,000 word range. Then I go through and pitch roughly half. I re-write whats left so that it makes sense and once again pitch half.

One, perhaps two, more re-writes and it&#039;s about as good as I can make it.

Then I let it rest a few days, cut another 1/3 to 1/4 and it&#039;s good to go.

I probably pare 5,000 words to get down to 1,500 ... but they are a -good- 1,500.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>My best posts start out in the 3,000 to 5,000 word range. Then I go through and pitch roughly half. I re-write whats left so that it makes sense and once again pitch half.</p>
<p>One, perhaps two, more re-writes and it&#8217;s about as good as I can make it.</p>
<p>Then I let it rest a few days, cut another 1/3 to 1/4 and it&#8217;s good to go.</p>
<p>I probably pare 5,000 words to get down to 1,500 &#8230; but they are a -good- 1,500.</p>
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		<title>By: Meeting With Self-made Millionaire Erica Douglass</title>
		<link>http://www.startbreakingfree.com/588/writing-less-is-better-and-harder-than-writing-more/comment-page-1/#comment-1248</link>
		<dc:creator>Meeting With Self-made Millionaire Erica Douglass</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 31 Dec 2008 22:50:33 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] are willing to put in the time and effort to become great. This is similar to a great book I read a little while back, Seth Godin&#8217;s The Dip, which I also highly [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] are willing to put in the time and effort to become great. This is similar to a great book I read a little while back, Seth Godin&#8217;s The Dip, which I also highly [...]</p>
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		<title>By: Creer un site</title>
		<link>http://www.startbreakingfree.com/588/writing-less-is-better-and-harder-than-writing-more/comment-page-1/#comment-1245</link>
		<dc:creator>Creer un site</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 03 Dec 2008 15:37:45 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>unfortunatly, for the blogs, search engines prefer quantity over quality, and at the beginning, reaching good positions in the SERPs would be a nightmare with 3 lines post</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>unfortunatly, for the blogs, search engines prefer quantity over quality, and at the beginning, reaching good positions in the SERPs would be a nightmare with 3 lines post</p>
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		<title>By: Matt Thomas</title>
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		<dc:creator>Matt Thomas</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 27 Nov 2008 02:24:28 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I completely agree with you. Unfortunately I tend to write longer pieces at times and I find that those that I edit down, the message is a lot clearer and is more easily delivered to the reader. It may be harder to edit down, but it is well worth it.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I completely agree with you. Unfortunately I tend to write longer pieces at times and I find that those that I edit down, the message is a lot clearer and is more easily delivered to the reader. It may be harder to edit down, but it is well worth it.</p>
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		<title>By: Brian Armstrong</title>
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		<dc:creator>Brian Armstrong</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 25 Nov 2008 20:21:27 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Good point, it could have been ever shorter...I know that quitting certain projects has been very hard for me so it was a message I needed to hear.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Good point, it could have been ever shorter&#8230;I know that quitting certain projects has been very hard for me so it was a message I needed to hear.</p>
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		<title>By: Creer un site</title>
		<link>http://www.startbreakingfree.com/588/writing-less-is-better-and-harder-than-writing-more/comment-page-1/#comment-1247</link>
		<dc:creator>Creer un site</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 24 Nov 2008 20:06:41 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I did not like &#039;the dip&#039; so much, I thought the concept can be so much concise. perhaps 5 pages, that&#039;s all

it&#039;s over and over the same concept, with a lot of examples which are not really necessary...</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I did not like &#8216;the dip&#8217; so much, I thought the concept can be so much concise. perhaps 5 pages, that&#8217;s all</p>
<p>it&#8217;s over and over the same concept, with a lot of examples which are not really necessary&#8230;</p>
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		<title>By: Dan Z.</title>
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		<dc:creator>Dan Z.</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 24 Nov 2008 16:38:43 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>If you are serious about whittling down your words to their essence, definitely take a look at William Zinsser&#039;s &quot;On Writing Well.&quot; It&#039;s almost as enjoyable to read as it is helpful -- something that can&#039;t be said of most writing/grammar books.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>If you are serious about whittling down your words to their essence, definitely take a look at William Zinsser&#8217;s &#8220;On Writing Well.&#8221; It&#8217;s almost as enjoyable to read as it is helpful &#8212; something that can&#8217;t be said of most writing/grammar books.</p>
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		<title>By: Caroline</title>
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		<dc:creator>Caroline</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 24 Nov 2008 09:36:29 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I agree it can be difficult to concentrate your writing so that it has more impact and less filler. One method I use is to re-read and either cut out sentences or combine several sentences into one.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I agree it can be difficult to concentrate your writing so that it has more impact and less filler. One method I use is to re-read and either cut out sentences or combine several sentences into one.</p>
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